#30 The finishing line

So this is it. Day #30 and I have six words left from Read Write Word #15. I have more than thirty poems. I have made some wonderful new blogging buddies whose poems I will continue to read and the prompts have been amazing.japan-2009-293

Keep writing!

This lunacy must end

It was less like hardscrabble
more like a magical mystery tour.
Thirty shiny pennies jingle
in my piggy bank of poems.
The company was wicked.
I’ve travelled on different cadences
and I close these thirty days
with nascent aspiration.

And to update my Naisaiku:

today’s the last day
thirty blossoms are blooming
A RED LETTER DAY
thirty poems are written
let’s have a party!

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10 Responses to “#30 The finishing line”

  1. sarah Says:

    it sure has been fun, and I’m so glad to have “met” you :-) I look forward to reading more of your poetry in the calmer weeks to come :-)

  2. irenet Says:

    you did a wickedly good spin on those words…i will be staying tuned. thank you so much for your words of encouragement.

  3. Kimberly Says:

    They are both wonderful, but I especially enjoyed the first poem. Congrats! And, I agree – time for a party!

  4. Liz at Yips and Howls Says:

    Good thing you saved those words. I love how you used them to sum up this experience. The company has indeed been wicked. Thanks for all your supportive comments and for sharing your wonderful work.

  5. Erin Says:

    I love what you’ve done with these words…a great tribute to the napowrimo experience. Congrats!

  6. Pam Says:

    I enjoyed reading all 30 of your poems this month. Your poetry has so much energy. Now we can rest a little.

  7. susan Says:

    Fine finish for the challenge. Rest. Then I’ll be back to read more.

  8. David King Says:

    Fine poem – very fine indeed.

  9. BSQUARED86 Says:

    Loved them both! Thank you for sharing your poetry with all of us! I will definitely stop by again!

  10. Sweet Talking Guy.. Says:

    Nicely done, a cool finish, and congrats on completing the thirty days, finally.

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