Still meditation
in a Japanese garden
provokes exertion.
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September 21, 2007 at 3:56 pm
This is quite wonderful. One of its strong assets is what I call the “flip-over” in the last line. This is characteristic of the very best haiku.
September 21, 2007 at 6:46 pm
Thank you.
July 15, 2009 at 3:57 am
I’m writing an article about Japanese gardens for a Tokyo publication and would like to quote your haiku on gardens/meditation/exertion. Could you please let me know if that is okay and what credit name/details you’d like me to use?
Thanks, Catherine
August 16, 2009 at 12:24 pm
I have sent a reply to your e-mail.