Haiku (1): Japanese garden

4 Responses to “Haiku (1): Japanese garden”

  1. William Webster Says:

    This is quite wonderful. One of its strong assets is what I call the “flip-over” in the last line. This is characteristic of the very best haiku.

  2. watermaid Says:

    Thank you.

  3. catherine shaw Says:

    I’m writing an article about Japanese gardens for a Tokyo publication and would like to quote your haiku on gardens/meditation/exertion. Could you please let me know if that is okay and what credit name/details you’d like me to use?

    Thanks, Catherine

  4. watermaid Says:

    I have sent a reply to your e-mail.

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